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when autumn falls and leaves my heart bare, the wind will blow my tears away; adrift with the foliage, I will think of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/20/2017 1:21:00 PM
Your title pulled me in and I enjoyed the beautiful scene that followed. Take care Joseph.
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Date: 12/8/2017 11:50:00 AM
What a lovely piece this is Joseph! I love the imagery and sweet, soft flow of your words and beautiful sentiments! Hugs and best wishes! Pandita
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:37:00 AM
Short and SO sweet. Marvellously done, Joseph.
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Date: 11/17/2017 3:58:00 PM
Very nice Joseph :)
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Date: 11/8/2017 5:05:00 AM
Nicely done Joseph...very smooth writing...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/8/2017 4:04:00 AM
Just beautiful Joseph, such deep meaning and imagery in such a few words....Maria
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Date: 11/8/2017 12:02:00 AM
Oh the title told me right away, I would love this poem, and the title did not lie!
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Date: 11/7/2017 2:48:00 PM
- I can feel your words, Joseph .... touching and lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/7/2017 1:32:00 PM
So touching my friend...
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Date: 11/7/2017 10:52:00 AM
Such a gentle melancholy poem, Joseph. So full of beautiful sadness. A splendid poem. Love and joy always.
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Date: 11/6/2017 5:56:00 PM
Hey Joseph, I have not thought of the wind this way. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 11/6/2017 3:59:00 PM
aww so so beautiful but sad Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/6/2017 2:56:00 PM
So much feeling in a few words... Wonderful Joseph
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Date: 11/6/2017 2:06:00 PM
A moving piece of emotions and imagery!
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