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Tears In the Wind

when autumn falls and
      leaves my heart bare, the wind
 will blow my tears away;
      adrift with the foliage, I
  will think of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Thomas Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Your title pulled me in and I enjoyed the beautiful scene that followed. Take care Joseph.
Sietesantos Avatar
December 8, 2017 at 11:50 AM
What a lovely piece this is Joseph! I love the imagery and sweet, soft flow of your words and beautiful sentiments! Hugs and best wishes! Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Short and SO sweet. Marvellously done, Joseph.
Sands Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Very nice Joseph :)
Warrior Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 5:05 AM
Nicely done Joseph...very smooth writing...god bless...^WW^
Williams Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 4:04 AM
Just beautiful Joseph, such deep meaning and imagery in such a few words....Maria
Vaso Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 12:02 AM
Oh the title told me right away, I would love this poem, and the title did not lie!
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 2:48 PM
- I can feel your words, Joseph .... touching and lovely - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 1:32 PM
So touching my friend...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 7, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Such a gentle melancholy poem, Joseph. So full of beautiful sadness. A splendid poem. Love and joy always.
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 3:59 PM
aww so so beautiful but sad Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:56 PM
So much feeling in a few words... Wonderful Joseph
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2017 at 2:06 PM
A moving piece of emotions and imagery!
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