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Lost music is like tears on the wind.  Made this rather quickly, didn't realize I was a quatrain short of a sonnet at the time.

Tears In the Wind

Tears In The Wind

Left hand deftly fingering strings on frets, 
While my right hand is picking or strumming. 
Composing a sad song about regrets
And searching a melody by humming. 
I easily find a chord progression,
Played in a melancholy minor key,
Then add some dynamics for expression--
Reaching a fugue-like state releases me
Fleeting perfection is my endeavor.
Like tears in the wind, now lost forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/28/2014 12:43:00 PM
This a brilliant piece. Love it!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/28/2014 1:34:00 PM
Thanks, glad you liked it. You might also like Turning Chaos Into harmony and/or Trying To Find The Groove, which have similar topics.
Date: 5/21/2014 3:02:00 PM
My friend, a short write that truly inspires! Good luck in the contest..
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/21/2014 5:37:00 PM
Thank you. I did feel rather inspired writing this one; it came out rather quickly without a lot of wordsmithing.
Date: 5/21/2014 12:45:00 PM
Short but speaks of much sadness...
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/21/2014 12:55:00 PM
It wasn't really meant to be sad, per se, just about writing a sad song. That fugue-like state is rather like bliss, to tell the truth. You might also like Trying To Find The Groove and Turning Chaos Into Harmony. Similar topics. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/21/2014 12:07:00 PM
awesome write
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/21/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thanks. You might also like Trying To Find The Groove and Turning Chaos Into Harmony. Similar topics.
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