Tears in The Vine Eyes

Written: January 17, 2026, for contest sponsored by Constance La France Quote: “Dusk remembers what the heart forgets.” By Poet ************ I never questioned tastefulness or sway. The vine bent through the fading of the day— Not like the softness of your lips on mine As dusk stole luster from the vineyard way. I revere the earth from which I refine, I implored for goodness, engrossed in wine. Beneath the dim shadows of the fall crop— It seems just warmth, nothing further divine. Each week, I grind myself down with a strop, Start our path, bound for the grave or the top. A long stretch, ending with tears in the eyes— Faith doesn't demand a grand ripple to drop You drift by day, resting below calm skies. No inflated self, just a lost disguise— Gone are the cheerful moods and youthful tales No grief or angst, yet left to stain the dyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kendrick Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 1:49 PM
Thank you for sharing this winner with us. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
La France Avatar
February 19, 2026 at 2:36 AM
Sotto, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in my contest Write A Beautiful Rubaiyat (My Version) I love the music and your quote, well done, Constance
Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 19, 2026 at 10:57 PM
your poem left me breathless....such outstanding metaphors and flow
Goldsmith Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 11:25 AM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. What a true quote. Sometimes there are No more tears left. "Good Luck" I did "Butterflies Will Welcome Spring." Have a lovely day/week writing away...............
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 6:18 PM
I agree with Yann here. Great metaphors and beautifully written I am glad you liked my angel poem
Rolland Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 5:06 PM
great metaphors, let us taste the fruits of vineyards, beautifully written poet
Hind Avatar
January 17, 2026 at 3:46 PM
A breathtaking Rubaiyat so down to earth, you pulled t out of the earth
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