tears in fall

fall sky blue bright light
crimson leaves carpeting earth
grave for a baby
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:24 PM
poignant and touching Haiku...enjoyed
Jones Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:34 PM
Thanks Sara!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Few words said it all. Your "tears in fall" is a powerful and sad write. Have a Blessed day writing away.........
Jones Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 3:36 PM
Thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Poignant…heart wrenching, really! I once went to a funeral for a five year old. Her brother’s hand was grasped by his mother while he held out his other toward the back door where his sister’s coffin was being taken. Permanently etched in my brain.
Jones Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 5:54 AM
Funerals for children are hard! I went to one for an infant and I have never gone to one again! It stays with you doesn’t it? Thanks for reading Kim!
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