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contest - Father -sponsor - Silent One - 5/30/26

Tears from My father

My father's heartless attacks stung me hard
he claimed a cold world to do as he pleased
the darkness carried was marred and scarred
fate had given him a soulless disease
they said you should have known him long before
I answered I never thought it would end
struggling with memories I abhor
the hate in his eyes I'll never defend
the length and breadth of sadness bind those days
when his ghostly hand swung a razor strap
the shadowed terror remembered still stays
haunted by the anguished welts on my back
  a child who sought love from a wishing well
  my childhood cries shaped by living through hell
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Seeker Avatar
July 4, 2026 at 8:27 PM
and yet we must forgive, release, transcend, melding with God’s golden sphere of pure love, emerging therefrom evolved, transformed, transcended
Carmack Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 8:59 PM
You were dealt a tough hand right at the start. Powerful poem and congratulations on your win.
bard Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:25 PM
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June 20, 2026 at 7:09 PM
Thanh you Frederic for your clarification Blessings Douglas
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 7:07 PM
it wasn't inherited it was ptsd from ww2
bard Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:33 PM
Good day Frederick Inherited behaviour. How many generations of fathers preceded the lack of love you received from your father. I believe they cannot give love because their self love tank is so deficient. Thank you for sharing you experience and congratulations on your win Blessings Douglas
One Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 1:35 PM
I am so sorry for what you had to endure and I guess, your father was a troubled man who took his anger out on you... Your sonnet, as always flows and rhymes so well, but they all do... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:20 PM
never to be forgotten Silent One, yet hard to remember
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 11:40 AM
- Terrible ... "a child who sought love from a wishing well" and was never heard ... deeply sensitive, Frederic - hugs
Parker Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Anne
Lane Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 10:58 AM
I felt goosebumps and sorrow while reading your lines, Frederic. No child should ever have bitter memories of a parent.
Lane Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 11:07 AM
Tis a far gentler subject. I understand.
Parker Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 11:01 AM
that's why I write a lot about love, dear poet
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