Tears Fell Like Rain

Over the years tears fell like rain, drowning any hope in my heart. And fragile dreams immersed in pain, slowly began to fall apart. Shunning rules of propriety, you placed yourself first and me last. And fueled by anxiety, love's allocated to the past. I remember the tender hugs that once made me feel ten feet tall. And your funny, innocent shrugs, I recall the charm of it all. When you ran off, I changed the locks, now all that's left is bitter tears. For, despite my pleas and long talks, your cheating grew over the years. You went where I couldn't follow, and yet, you beg forgiveness still. But your empty words ring hollow, you don't love me and never will. Life was perfect, without a flaw, till I became yesterday's toy. And you loaded that final straw that broke my heart and stole my joy. (Quatrain) 12/29/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/16/2018 4:40:00 PM
Some people are incapable of love. Great poem about finding out the hard way.
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Date: 1/4/2016 6:32:00 PM
Love could be wrong , could cause major pain and heart could be stupid and blind sometimes but love in all the ways is a bless cause what ever it was the feeling at least you will know that you can and still feel....mesmerizing work indeed....hugs / / :) dalia
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/5/2016 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Dalia, your comments are most welcome. Emile.
Date: 12/29/2015 9:02:00 AM
The heart is a treacherous thing. Stubborn to the point of falling in love even when it knows danger lurks. You hit all the casualties with your words. Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/29/2015 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Lin, yes hearts can be stubborn things, I enjoy your friendly comments. Emile.
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