Beryl Edmonds Poet Triolet

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Written - 1st February 2024 - Fiction, from a male perspective.

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Tears Fall Again - A Triple Triolet

I hear your voice and the tears fall again
As babbling brooks flow and soft breezes blow
When birds sing us their sweet morning refrain
I hear your voice and the tears fall again.

Without you this life simply isn’t the same
Time goes by slowly and I miss you so
I hear your voice and the tears fall again
As babbling brooks flow and soft breezes blow.

I see you in stars glittering brightly 
Memories made from moonlight romancing
When the two of us were young and sprightly
I see you in stars glittering brightly.

You are the queen of my dreams seen nightly
With the both of us joyfully dancing
I see you in stars glittering brightly 
Memories made from moonlight romancing.

I miss the touch of your hand held in mine
The sweet kiss from lips that made my heart flip
Our embrace too exquisite to define
I miss the touch of your hand held in mine. 

I cherish moments that stood still in time
The ecstasy and bliss of our courtship
I miss the touch of your hand held in mine
The sweet kiss from lips that made my heart flip.

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2024 at 7:05 AM - A heart-touching poem, Belle ... lovely :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar February 5, 2024 at 10:48 AM A poem that lists the emotions of failed love. It touches my heart. A popular subject.

Jerry Brotherton February 3, 2024 at 2:22 PM A very romantic poem, my friend. Jam-packed with emotion and so well written.

Susan Lawrence February 3, 2024 at 11:00 AM Beryl, Such a moving, beautiful poem you have written, and such a pleasure to read the words that have come straight from your heart and soul. Sending you all good wishes. Happy weekend and thank you for your visit to my poem. Big hugs, Susan :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 2, 2024 at 12:40 PM Dear Beryl, Wow, Your poem is incredibly moving. The repetition and imagery create such a striking atmosphere, capturing the longing and depth of your emotions. Your words beautifully express the ache of missing someone dearly. Lots of Emotions and I loved it. - Blessings, Daniel

Robert Schatz February 2, 2024 at 12:35 AM Your depiction of the joy and romance of the past is gorgeous, and so deeply sad the memory. It's a beautiful, moving poem Belle...

Bill Baker February 1, 2024 at 8:36 PM Very creative to flip the roles, Beryl. Very good Triolet form and so romantic. I enjoyed the excellent imagery. Thanks for sharing your talents with us, my friend. Hugs, Bill

Hilda Greenhough February 1, 2024 at 6:20 PM This poem caught my attention for its rhyming romance and the clever repeats. You have my admiration.

Ink Empress February 1, 2024 at 12:18 PM I can feel the male voice that is missing their beloved now no longer with them so strongly as i read this poem, and you did that very well in such a captivating manner. I loved the flow and rhythm and also how youv written “ I miss the touch of your hand held in mine The sweet kiss from lips that made my heart flip“ soul stirring really! And so moving. “ I see you in stars glittering brightly Memories made from moonlight romancing“ thats true love right there … pleasure reading your work Beryl Edmonds February 1, 2024 at 4:56 PM Thank you so much Ink, I’m truly grateful all your encouragement, it’s a great pleasure to read your truly incredible work, it’s amazing. Beryl

Silent One February 1, 2024 at 10:17 AM A triple triolet which is emotive and heart warming... You did it so well and the flow and rhymes are spot on.. Beryl Edmonds February 1, 2024 at 10:22 AM Thank you Silent One, very kind and much appreciated. Beryl