Tears

A pristine crystal droplet
For but a moment, suspended
Cascades with abandonment
And splashes on my sorrow

sadfree verse

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Cecilia Macfarlane

January 25, 2012 at 7:52 PM

Few words but yet so powerfully felt....congrats on your win!

Bob Quigley

January 25, 2012 at 9:50 PM

Much appreciated Cecilia

Sara Kendrick

January 23, 2012 at 2:57 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Bob Quigley

January 24, 2012 at 8:30 AM

Thank you Sara.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 23, 2012 at 11:52 AM

Congratulations on your super win Bob. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

January 23, 2012 at 12:18 PM

Thank you Carol

Harry Horsman

January 23, 2012 at 10:57 AM

This is brilliant Bob, so much depth and feeling here. harry. congrats on number 1. harry

Bob Quigley

January 23, 2012 at 11:28 AM

Thanks Harry

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2012 at 9:02 PM

oh, and I see you just won something with it. CONGRATS

Bob Quigley

January 22, 2012 at 10:13 PM

Yup. I was fortunate enough to have it selected.

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2012 at 9:02 PM

wow, what imagery in this one, Bob. I liked it immensely!

Robert Pettit

January 22, 2012 at 8:06 PM

Congratulations on your win with this entry. Just a few words here, but they are collectively very descriptive.

Bob Quigley

January 22, 2012 at 10:13 PM

Thanks Bob

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2012 at 1:15 PM

Very expressive one that you have penned this time..The emotive quality grabbed me..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Bob Quigley

January 22, 2012 at 5:10 PM

Thank you Sara for your comments.

Lizanne Scholtz

January 22, 2012 at 9:54 AM

wonderful, love it. congratulations on your well deserved win Bob. Elizabeth

Bob Quigley

January 22, 2012 at 12:35 PM

Thank you Elizabeth

Gwendolen Song

January 22, 2012 at 8:38 AM

WOW WOW WOW! You even made a single tear drop a form of art!! See , this is why you are one of my favorite poets!! There is so much science in a tear...look it up if you ever get the time..Congrats Mr. Quigley.. Again I say- CONGRATS!!!

Bob Quigley

January 22, 2012 at 8:53 AM

WOW WOW WOW! Thank you very much Gwen. High praise coming from someone so accomplished. Very much appreciated.