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"tears"

You can't sweep up tears

                       nor can they be blown away

                                                 only held and seen.

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Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2010 at 8:41 PM

Tears seem a big theme in the poems of yours I read tonight. Now let's see some smiles! Goodnight, Michael. Luv, Andrea

Sherelle Smith

November 7, 2010 at 9:27 AM

Your words are very beautiful your poems always jump off the page into my heart great Senryu

Audonus Taylor

November 6, 2010 at 6:14 PM

Thanks for the return comment man. I love this piece as well, not as much as the other I read which was just amazing, but this is great stuff. So few words but so true. You are like a philospher/writer

Sylvia Coulstock

November 6, 2010 at 7:45 AM

This is truly wonderful Michael.I love the images the beautiful sentiments and in so few words!To me,class 1 poetry.Soon as I read this it blew me away. Love June(S)

Kim Hilliker

November 6, 2010 at 4:38 AM

Something to ponder, Michael. Good Senryu. Thanks for sharing.

November 5, 2010 at 4:42 PM

Thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I really like the last line. Keep up the good writing. Thank you also for your kind words on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 5, 2010 at 8:23 AM

Very cute and thought provoking with great images, Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 5, 2010 at 7:12 AM

Thanks for your comments on my poem Diwali. Please share my blogs on Diwali festival,Michael

Fabiyas M V

November 5, 2010 at 7:03 AM

it is true,dear friend.beautifully presented,fabiyas

Wilma Neels

November 5, 2010 at 4:30 AM

Some see them as a weakness Michael, to me it's a form of cleansing and sometimes a renewal of strength.. Another favorite because this is so true - love W

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

November 4, 2010 at 8:40 PM

Brilliant Michael sad too

Barbara Gorelick

November 4, 2010 at 4:35 PM

And easily replenished. Love it...BG

Debbie Guzzi

November 4, 2010 at 4:21 PM

interesting thought! Light & Love

James Marshall Goff

November 4, 2010 at 4:20 PM

so true, Michael...jimbo

John Rhinem

November 4, 2010 at 3:52 PM

Smile ~ But sooo very precious they are "My Dear Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!" ~ Psalm 56:8 ~ It makes my heart often bleed to behold tears from Anyones "Beautiful Eyes" &, "Your Treasures" poe is but a stirring verse of bittersweet splendour this, snap-shots image of "The Beauty Inside 'Your Precious Soul!!!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear Friend;'" Bye!:) ~