Tears

T-ears are eloquent E-ach one drops as we wallow A-dds balm to your soul R-ivers of flowing sorrow S-ilent gushing from a hole 18.5.2021 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: TANKACROSTIC

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:04:00 PM

Tears can be happy or sad, and strangely enough, they can make you feel better. Nice write, Carol! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/8/2021 6:24:00 PM

Thank you dear Kim...much love :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/6/2021 2:27:00 PM

Excellent. Congratulations!

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj.....I am glad you liked it :)

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj.....I am glad you liked it :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 1:30:00 PM

Hi Carol, What a well-executed write on tears. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 7:26:00 PM

Thank you dear Alexis....much love :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:05:00 PM

Loved your imagery here, Carol. gosh, as I read it again, I'm thinking I should have given it a second place. Anyway, Congrats. This was so good.

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 7:25:00 PM

Hi dear Andrea....Thank you, I am glad you liked it....much love :)

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 5/22/2021 11:17:00 AM

"Silent gushing from a hole." Heavy laden as is one in unwarranted pain; and yet the soul revives again and made whole by virtue of faith.

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/22/2021 6:13:00 PM

You could not have summed it up better....Thank you Iris.

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/18/2021 1:16:00 PM

I love that first line," Tears are eloquent." That is deep! They say more than any words can express. Nicely penned, Carol. Good luck!

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/18/2021 11:15:00 PM

Yes I feel that way too.....Thank you Daniel for your kind thoughts and words.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/17/2021 11:01:00 PM

Beautiful sentiments, Carol, your words soothe the eyes, Aloha!

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/17/2021 11:46:00 PM

Thanks William....much appreciated