Tears

I wish these tears Would fill up a lake A lake of the earth’s Despair and pain. I wish these tears Would fill up the earth, A deluge of joy For all to share.

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/24/2018 1:21:00 PM

beautifully penned Kudzai, lets hope the tears of joy far outweigh the tears of despair in our lives:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/1/2018 7:20:00 AM

Tears of pain, tears of joy , the whole of humanity, profusely deploy! Excellent my friend, Kudzja!

Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 6/4/2018 1:24:00 AM

Thank you very much for the comment my friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/31/2018 6:12:00 AM

Beautiful contrasting stanzas--well written as always, Kudzai.

Kudzai Mhangwa
Date: 6/1/2018 1:16:00 AM

Thanks for your kind words Vijay!