Tears

I wish these tears 
Would fill up a lake
A lake of the earth’s 
Despair and pain. 

I wish these tears 
Would fill up the earth,
A deluge of joy
For all to share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Allison Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 1:21 PM
beautifully penned Kudzai, lets hope the tears of joy far outweigh the tears of despair in our lives:-) hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 7:20 AM
Tears of pain, tears of joy , the whole of humanity, profusely deploy! Excellent my friend, Kudzja!
Mhangwa Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 1:24 AM
Thank you very much for the comment my friend.
Pandit Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 6:12 AM
Beautiful contrasting stanzas--well written as always, Kudzai.
Mhangwa Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 1:16 AM
Thanks for your kind words Vijay!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace