Tearful

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Written 3/12/2024 for Tattered, Tearful, Threadbare, Tomb Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

“Tearful night prayer sounds devour darken maze of memories of love steal the slumber leaving behind loneliness.” Quote by poet Heartbroken sorrow, pleading in tearful Emotional, goodbye as life still goes on. Beneath cold twilight night’s sweet scent With utter shadowed obscurity stillness Spread mournful utter poetic quiet love As tears weave through the teal blue sea Forcing acoustic waves and foam settle inshore. Steps lost in nostalgic memories of youth.

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Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2024 5:07:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I love the quote too, Constance

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 3/17/2024 10:08:00 AM

Eve, Intrinsic sorrow felt by you twilight, acoustic wave, and memories of youth! Beautifully written- emotionally felt. Health and Happiness Lonna

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/15/2024 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Tearful" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Deb M

Date: 3/12/2024 6:28:00 AM

A real heart tugger for me Eve…..just so beautifully written! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2024 2:37:00 AM

- A sensitive poem, Eve - Beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 3/12/2024 1:44:00 AM

A good tearful description. Well done.