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Tearful

By Poet "Tears are rain from the eyes."

Last night it rained~a very tearful God

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Constance La France

April 23, 2024 at 5:33 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

April 24, 2024 at 2:03 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Tearful" monoku write. Thanks for my placement and for having this contest. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Valsa George

March 16, 2024 at 6:29 AM

Great monoku. Congratulations dear Sara.

Paula Goldsmith

March 16, 2024 at 12:02 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my "Tearful" write to be a great monoku. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

March 15, 2024 at 9:11 AM

"4 Place" Tearful ~ Date Written:3/8/2024

Nancy Kaufman

March 15, 2024 at 5:53 AM

Dear Paula, I really loved this sad and emotive Monoku. It delivers such a heavy hearted image of God's disappointment with humanity. I am impressed how so many poets on this site are so incredibly versatile with the various styles of poetry. Blessing to you and congratulations!!

Paula Goldsmith

March 15, 2024 at 9:09 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you loved reading my "Tearful" Monoku write. It is only one line but I loved writing this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2024 at 3:27 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

March 15, 2024 at 9:07 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Tearful" write again. Always great to see you. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Phyllis Babcock

March 13, 2024 at 11:03 AM

Hi Paula a great monoku and I think not only do our tears flow but God must look at this earth and cry or rain his eyes out over the state of it. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith

March 14, 2024 at 1:34 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Tearful" write to be a great monoku. I enjoyed writing this Monoku. It is true. The night before it had rained. With the world the way it is, I thought God must had been crying. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Andrea Dietrich

March 9, 2024 at 12:54 PM

So creative, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

March 10, 2024 at 8:58 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Tearful" write to be so creative. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Silent One

March 9, 2024 at 11:24 AM

Excellent monoku dear Paula.. nice idea for the contest..

Paula Goldsmith

March 10, 2024 at 8:57 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Tearful" write to be an excellent monoku. I love when my readers like what I write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Stephan McBride

March 9, 2024 at 8:12 AM

Indeed, sad my friend, for what God prepared for us and not many to attend the wedding feast

Paula Goldsmith

March 10, 2024 at 8:56 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Tearful" write. Sad because God made it all for good. I cannot wait for the wedding feast. Many will miss it. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 9, 2024 at 6:34 AM

- A sad poem, Paula - Hope the sun shines in your wet eyes today:) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

March 9, 2024 at 7:20 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Tearful" write. Yes, sad because God must be sad. It had rained all night. I think the rain was God crying over everything. Today, the sun is out. What a bright/pretty spring day we have. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 8, 2024 at 4:19 PM

Dear Paula, I love how your words create a vivid picture of nature mirroring human emotions. Your poem beautifully captures the melancholy of tears merging with raindrops, evoking a sense of empathy and connection with the divine. Paula, Thank you for sharing such heartfelt reflections. - Blessings, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

March 15, 2024 at 9:04 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Tearful" write. I enjoyed reading your wonderful comment. Thank You.... Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................

Paula Goldsmith

March 8, 2024 at 1:27 PM

Tearful ~ Date Written:3/8/2024

Tearful

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