Teardrops

These belong to the eyes. 
They are clumsy, my eyes 
Because they are always dropping tears. 
Tears are crystals of liquid, 
Shimmering in light, 
Impossibly beautiful,  
As though their meaning is good. 
Why are the gems that fall 
Why are they like diamonds? 
Sparkling, as if snowflakes? 
Their facets are eyes, 
Their mines, your emotions, 
How did this come to be? 
Tears are the gems of your heart. 
They show what you think, 
Your thoughts are written on these precious stones. 
They are merely water, 
Yet powerful enough to shift the heavy burden of a Mind. 
And they come without warning, 
These stones of feeling. 
They carve tracks 
Into the weathered stone 
Of your face. 
They are waterfalls 
That wash the colour of the world 
Out of your eyes. 
They drip, 
Less than blood, 
But still as thick, 
And sweeter. 
But they cause you to see less colour, 
It has been washed away by those rivers 
Of ocean water. 
So tears cannot stop. 
As long as you cannot, 
Neither can they.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 11, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Great read.. Skat
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May 10, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Loving how you mentioned that our tears "shift the burdens" of life - very truthful. Wonderful imagery throughout this vivid piece, Fiona.
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May 16, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Thank you, all of you. You've helped with my next poem a lot.
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