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Teardrop


A
Drop
Trickles

Down her face

She looks misty-eyed

Soul-broken, pain token

All she can do now is cry

Flood of emotions

S p i l l  over



9th Feb 2023

Copyright © Joanna Daniel | Year Posted 2023

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February 12, 2023 at 8:31 AM

Dear Jo, there is poignant beauty in sadness and your soulful poem reflects the emotional suffering that sparkles in each teardrop. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

February 10, 2023 at 3:46 AM

Congratulations on this wonderful winner. Stupendous. Good design. Sara

Joseph P. DiMino

February 9, 2023 at 12:10 PM

Painful to be real...but always better to have felt. Touching write. Joe.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 9, 2023 at 11:12 AM

Your perfect teardrop is both sad and lovely to see, Jo. An admirable creation. :)

February 9, 2023 at 8:21 AM

Excellent. We'll written :)

February 9, 2023 at 6:21 AM

Truly an overwhelming array of feelings, Jo - lamentable poetry that's beautifully written

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 9, 2023 at 1:21 AM

- Oh,... yes really a flood of emotions, Jo - Sad poem / lovely written - Have a great day :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

February 9, 2023 at 1:14 AM

Though sad, it is a beautiful poem.

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