Teardrop

A Drop Trickles Down her face She looks misty-eyed Soul-broken, pain token All she can do now is cry Flood of emotions S p i l l over 9th Feb 2023

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/12/2023 8:31:00 AM

Dear Jo, there is poignant beauty in sadness and your soulful poem reflects the emotional suffering that sparkles in each teardrop. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/10/2023 3:46:00 AM

Congratulations on this wonderful winner. Stupendous. Good design. Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/9/2023 12:10:00 PM

Painful to be real...but always better to have felt. Touching write. Joe.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/9/2023 11:12:00 AM

Your perfect teardrop is both sad and lovely to see, Jo. An admirable creation. :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/9/2023 8:21:00 AM

Excellent. We'll written :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/9/2023 6:21:00 AM

Truly an overwhelming array of feelings, Jo - lamentable poetry that's beautifully written

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/9/2023 4:39:00 AM

This is lovely

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/9/2023 1:21:00 AM

- Oh,... yes really a flood of emotions, Jo - Sad poem / lovely written - Have a great day :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/9/2023 1:14:00 AM

Though sad, it is a beautiful poem.