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teardrop of happiness misfortune-stricken man's spirit is lifted by kindness his saturnine day profoundly brightened; money given to him buys him a mouth-watering meal! happy, grateful teardrop STRAND NO 760,any form any theme Contest Judged: 5/18/2020 (Winner: Honorable Mention) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date written: 05/17/2020

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Date: 5/18/2020 3:32:00 AM
Beautifully written :) A great capture of that fulfilling smile through your generous mind's eye :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/18/2020 6:17:00 AM
Thanks so much, Swetha:-) I apprectiate your lovely comments and visit!
Date: 5/17/2020 1:10:00 PM
love the sentiment and the fact the poem looks tear drop shaped - paying it forward is more difficult in the present situation but i do it for my friend who was so supportive when my hubby had cancer surgery and she got our shopping, now I do it for her and an elderly couple:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/17/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thank you, Jan:-) How noble of you paying it forward...but then again, that's what friends do for each other! I originally wanted to do this poem in shape form but realized I could perfect the teardrop shape with a rictameter. Blessings to you! xoxo