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I search my garden for the perfect crimson rose to take to your tomb, my love- Tear wet- with sadness I lay on your resting place- Still holding the crimson rose . . . _____________________________ July 25, 2016 Poetry/Sedoka/Tear Wet With Sadness Copyright Protected, ID 16-811-411-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseuydonym. For the contest, Crimson sponsor, Royal Ninja First Place

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Date: 8/2/2016 9:15:00 AM
Lovely :)
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Date: 7/28/2016 2:09:00 PM
BW, this is a heartfelt write. Brilliant piece :) hugs Wilma
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:54:00 AM
Powerful!
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Date: 7/25/2016 10:11:00 AM
sad and beautiful Constance - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 2:30:00 AM
Your poem wrings out the sadness by just adding a few words.. "I lay on your resting place" Brilliant Constance! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/25/2016 1:46:00 AM
Very nice and touching ....
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