Constance La France Poet Sedoka

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Tear Wet With Sadness

     I search my garden
for the perfect crimson rose
to take to your tomb, my love-
     Tear wet-  with sadness
I lay on your resting place-
       Still holding the crimson rose . . .



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July 25, 2016

Poetry/Sedoka/Tear Wet With Sadness
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Joanna Daniel August 2, 2016 at 9:15 AM Lovely :)

Wilma Neels July 28, 2016 at 2:09 PM BW, this is a heartfelt write. Brilliant piece :) hugs Wilma

Louis Borgo July 28, 2016 at 8:54 AM Powerful!

Jan Allison July 25, 2016 at 10:11 AM sad and beautiful Constance - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2016 at 2:30 AM Your poem wrings out the sadness by just adding a few words.. "I lay on your resting place" Brilliant Constance! 7 ; )

Probir Gupta July 25, 2016 at 1:46 AM Very nice and touching ....