Tear Drops

Blue eyes moisture filled Coping skill definition Rain still coming down

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Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 12/12/2012 11:09:00 PM

Lovely poem!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/2/2012 11:45:00 PM

I love haiku's ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2012 10:40:00 AM

I like how you related this to the rain. Very haiku-ish!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/27/2012 2:50:00 PM

lovely haiku, my friend

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/27/2012 12:44:00 PM

NICE haiku Vince. You have been on my mind all week but was away so I hope all is well with you. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2012 8:40:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work this morning..Hope there is no sad rain clouds your way...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/26/2012 10:46:00 AM

Well said and well written Vince, thank you for visit my new poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise