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Tear Drop

TEARDROP Compare your teardrop To a falling leaf Both signal sadness, Releasing of grief 'Tho the leaf is lost For the health of the tree The teardrop reminds us Of how life could be The tear brings a cleansing And provides a review The leaf ends its life So the tree can renew Both signal a change As seasons attest A positive journey Unblocks one's success

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 6:43:00 PM
Very good...nice rhythm and rhyme, well developed theme. I liked it.
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Book: Shattered Sighs