Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Fibonacci

Tear

If
I
Were a
Small tear 
In your eyes then
I would roll down onto your lips
In case if I were a tear in my eyes then
I would certainly never be crying but would be so happy to leave you a kiss.

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September 5, 2014
Form: Fibonacci (Syllables-1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21...) 
Dr. Ram Mehta
Sixth Place Win
Contest: The Poet II by Gautami Phookan

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Gautami Phookan September 17, 2014 at 4:51 AM Thank you for this poem, I loved it! The form looks so nice,, and the last line I found very sweet! Congrats Dr Ram on your win,,, and regards

Brenda Meier-Hans September 14, 2014 at 7:34 PM Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Jan Allison September 14, 2014 at 2:00 PM dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser September 7, 2014 at 11:55 AM Simply delightful Dr. Ram, James :)

Faye Gibson September 5, 2014 at 4:09 PM I have never used this form before, Dr. Ram. I like what you did. Best wishes.

Barbara Gorelick September 5, 2014 at 1:48 PM IVe got to look up this form again...this is very sweet. BG

Jan Allison September 5, 2014 at 12:59 PM Beautiful write Dr Mehta I have never seen this form before :-) good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx

Kenisha Shines September 5, 2014 at 12:05 PM very beautifully written and all the best for the wishes.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 5, 2014 at 11:57 AM Wow Dr Ram that's an amazing one! Great thought n well penned, unique form, best wishes!