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Teaching a Young Lover

The first time witnessing the twain mountain peaks, High above the echoes of our heart beat, Erected I stood, in awe I stare, with eyes devouring nature’s beautiful souvenir. Below the Twin crags fingers softly stroll along a sweat drenched path. Inch by inch digits artfully tread around a shallow furrow. Racing heart beats are like the wings of a thousand sparrows. Down in yonder valley two fingers gently creep. Skin shivers on the mound where the fescue freely grows. Along the cleft, in the distal knoll, a tributary streams. Near the wet land is a cave, a place of fertile dreams. Desire drives daring digits to dive deeper into the warm unknown. Tell me lover, tell me more about the birds and the bees. How did the stork bring mother a girl like me? Every time you’re next to me, what is it that I feel? Blazing like a fire is this tension in my blood. Enthralled me with your touch Engulf me in your love. Serinade me with these words: "I love you, oh so much."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/9/2010 3:10:00 PM
The image and words are captivating, love the romantic lovers leason. A nice warm touch to love. Enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:16:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Earle. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:24:00 PM
Earle, I was reading and enjoying the romantic imagery in this poem so much I didn't even realize it was an acrostic. THIS is the way an acrostic should be done. Excellent! If this doesn't win, I'll eat my hair. Don't need to wish you luck in the contest -- talent speaks for itself. Outstanding! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:51:00 PM
wow, awesome entry for the contest
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