Teach Me In a Dream

Constellations of values and ethics 
like dancing stars in onyx nights. 
Majestic fields of ideals stay grounded 
in what only seems right. Keenly, I search 
philosopher’s heels to grasp theoretical 
notions, held together by gravity’s scales 
as comets of light circle in tails
and teach me in a dream.




What is the uniqueness of your poetry?
Someone once said to me that “poetry can’t include abstract language.”

Well, that really got me going! As a lover of language and theory I just couldn’t let this one pass. The uniqueness of my poem is that I use abstract language with planetary imagery to lightly illustrate two mega-abstract ideas, ethics & philosophy. The end culminates that all knowledge is refutable (i.e. “and teach me in a dream”).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/7/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Impressive Line"contest Jul;ie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2011 10:36:00 PM
JUKIE ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:36:00 PM
* “I Love This Fabulous & Fantastic Painting Amid Poetry * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Julie * I Try Not to Run Amid Certain Circles Myself * Trying to Keep My Mind Clear of Something Far Beyound This Drop In Time of Existence & Life * Although I Truly Admire & Appreciate, Lovely Intelligent, Strong-Willed & Loving Beauty Etc. * Dreams * Yessss, This Would Surely Also Be A Fit For Myself * Absolutely Beautiful & Into The Faves It Goes * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/4/2011 5:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Ethics is something that is grounded in many..A person's philosophy can be anything and they can come up with things to back it up but it might not be really ethical at all..Good one to get people to thinking..Sara
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