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Tea time

If you thought it kind, or perhaps naught
I'd write you a fine sonnet.

If it please'd I beg, on bended knee
a spirited song, or dutiful etheree..   
  
Alas a fly in pudding lies, a mote in sorrow'd eye
a snag in all best laid plans.. 
  
Tea time's nigh, so come sit beside    
and hold my hand.

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Tom Woody Date: 12/14/2023 6:30:00 PM I'll decline but yeah, go ahead and write me a sonnet Richard Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/14/2023 7:40:00 PM Tom, In the running for the nomination; "best comedic comment". Thanks a million, I needed that! -Richard

Heidi Sands Date: 12/14/2023 8:27:00 AM This is nice Richard. I hope you have a beautiful day :) Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/14/2023 7:35:00 PM Heidi, Thank you, I hope you have the stoves ready for another winter. Singing praises of days filled with mountain's music. -Richard

Charles Messina Date: 12/14/2023 4:22:00 AM Lovely write, Richard. Thanks for your visit, my friend. All the best, Charlie Login to Reply Quoth Theraven Date: 12/14/2023 7:31:00 PM Charlie, Your name is apt for this season. Least the way I see fit to remember it. But thanks just the same. And this one, 2023. You cross the finish line of another year, race run, wondering if you got anywhere. Looking back for all those that were just behind me, still didn't quite make it. So much in life. -Richard

Panagiota Romios Date: 12/13/2023 5:08:00 PM I’ll be right over to hold your hand))) What a celighful and lightpoem. Sonnets, I will pen, when I learn meter. I hear it ..but cannot write it? Tisthe bane of my life. Pangie Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 12/14/2023 2:05:00 PM Lol. I was a minor star in Chicago. I was part of the Second City Impov Theater. Moved on to do stand up comedy. I never did one liners.., i just talked about my life….people asked me, who my writer,”was,roflmao. I love performing over writing. It’s such a rush! OMG. I never used obscenity!. My best friend was aPulitzerPrize winner, wow,,,what a humble man, he’s known internationally.! Pangie Quoth Theraven Date: 12/13/2023 8:21:00 PM Hi Panagiota, it's so nice to hear from a favorite artist. Chicago is missing a star somewhere methinks. -Richard