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Tea Party in the Attic

The attic is creaky and full of dust, but, I just pretend it is my stardust; I love playing tea party with my pets, they sit as I recite my alphabets ! At the table is Willy a huge dog, black and white fur such a gentle lapdog; and a pretty tabby cat named Annie, and one cat called Smarty owned by Granny ! Licking her tea is my fat cat Happy, a tabby cat who can be quite snappy; and last sitting on a chair is Teddy, oh, my teddy bear is always ready ! Sometimes, I bring my dolls but not today, I told them that on the bed they must stay; love how light from a window likes to shine, making the specks of dust drift so divine ! I tell my guests about all the great stuff, in old trunks that I would find soon enough; dresses and jewelry to play dress up, oh, Teddy did I forget your teacup ! _________________________ November 1, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/Tea Party in the Attic Copyright Protected, ID 11-1403-056-01 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Rhyme Me A Poem 2 sponsor, Eve Roper, Image inspiration #4 First Place

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Date: 11/23/2021 9:29:00 AM
This is filled to the brim with a child's delight of a tea party - all dressed up for the occasion! Congratulations on your win Constance! Sending your blessings and peace!
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Date: 11/23/2021 12:18:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations, peace ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/18/2021 3:40:00 PM
what a sweet poem Constance, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2021 6:08:00 AM
Jan, thank you for the compliment and the congrats, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/15/2021 8:33:00 AM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your win! What a delightful story you have told....sounds like it was a lot of fun! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/15/2021 9:00:00 AM
Paulette, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, it was delightful to write ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/14/2021 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations!! I love your poem, and I could picture everything in the attic with the dust specks floating in the air, seen only in that shimmer of light. Great job!! -Meghan
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Date: 11/15/2021 7:40:00 AM
Meghan, thank you for the visit and the congratulations and compliment, appreciate ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 11/14/2021 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/14/2021 2:15:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the inspiration and the contest and my great placement and the congratulations, hugs ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/2/2021 6:32:00 AM
This is lovely, Constance, great flow and rhythm:)
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Date: 11/2/2021 2:19:00 PM
Jo, thank you for the compliment and the visit ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 11/1/2021 3:35:00 PM
Awe this is so sweet Constance. I chose the same image too. It's simply adorable isn't it. Love your poem. :-D
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Date: 11/2/2021 4:29:00 AM
Natasha, thanks for the compliment, agree the image is sweet ~ love and serenity _Constance

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