Tchaikovsky

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The baton rises The water shimmers like diamonds Swan Lake Symphony

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Rollo West

Date: 2/4/2018 9:40:00 PM

HI ANDREA. THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION ON THE WORD RAISES. YOU ARE CORRECT AND I APPRECIATE YOUR INPUT. RISES WOULD HAVE MADE IT READ BETTER. LOOKING FORWARD TO CREATING AGAIN AND BEING BACK WITH FRIENDS LIKE YOU. ROLLO

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2018 7:49:00 PM

hey there, long time no see!! I really like this, but you know what? if you said "the baton RISES" it would be even better! Love this.