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Tatters

I’m a clown part- time for children’s parties.
I laugh because for my job. that matters.
What kind of clown would I be to show my tears?
I cry inside because my heart is in tatters.

I had a wife who loved me very much.
We had a child born of our love so true!
His face was fair; his hair was honey-colored.
And always laughter twinkled in his eyes of blue.

One day my wife was bringing our son home
when out of nowhere came a horrid man
who reeked of liquor as so recklessly
he crashed into my dear ones with his van.

My only comfort is their death was swift,
for instantly they died that fateful day.
Two years have passed, and still I cry myself
to sleep each night. The pain won’t go away.

I paint a smile on my face for parties,
but now there’s nothing in my life that matters
because this lonely heart of mine’s been shattered,
and so the name I go by now is Tatters!

Jan. 9, 2023 N/A
Submitted 1/14/2023 for 'BRIAN STRAND CONTEST NO 1170' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 1/9/2023 1:39:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I like the flow, rhythm, and rhyme plus the topic is very well thought out. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/9/2023 1:26:00 PM
Very good story, good luck my friend
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Date: 1/9/2023 10:10:00 AM
Hiding one’s emotions behind makeup or a smile, how many of us do that Andrea, I’d imagine quite a lot, especially in front of a children’s party, more going on in this one than meets the eye, excellent penning, cheers David
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Date: 1/9/2023 2:46:00 AM
Always find clowns sad to begin with. This one really tugs, and no one can miss the pain running through it. Never understood the short sentences drink drivers get, which just makes it worse.
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Date: 1/9/2023 1:46:00 AM
You pull the strings of my heart. Many drivers are reckless. I saw two yesterday, driving down a hill. One almost skidded into a wall, the other must have damaged his tyre. Sad but beautiful story.
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:06:00 AM
Oh! A really heart-tugging story, Andrea, sadly true for many!!
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