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Tatters

Freckles fall from Tatters downtrodden countenance.
They fell like snow onto his chest below. Only one
landed on his nose, Rudolph-proud. He shared
Bozo’s hair - orange and red - a frenetic flair. Face
is narrow, pale - with blue eyes - used to be 
pie in the sky blueberry…now Tatters is just blue.
Lips, thin and pink; eyebrows like charcoal crows.

Tatters donned his clown suit when he was twenty-one,
after he downed his first whiskey at the circus. A drunken
clown - is there any other - aren’t they funnier? Audience 
applauds when he attempts a unicycle and when he rides
pink elephants. Now twenty-five he longs to shed
his jaundice billow of ruffles chained about his neck.

He will! He did! But alas it is too late. He’s not nearly
as funny…his elephant’s gray, but…
he still falls off his seat -
the crowd applauds at his insane antics
when he tumbles from the unicycle.

Only the redhead teen, with freckles,
sees a tattered-tear splashdown in the big tent.
Her sensitive hands will speak
as she depicts his suffering in indelible ink.

The clown gains serious applause - after all
his life’s framed in the teen’s blueberry eyes.

1/5/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gasun Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Such a wonderful and interesting narrative poem my dear friend Kim. Congratulations on your 2nd place win! Thanks for sharing! Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Thank you, my friend Len!
Agustin Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this reality in your excellent poetic style. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2023 at 7:41 AM
God bless you too, sweet poet! :)
Anaya Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Congratulations on your win, Kim! Tatters hides behind a clown's frown, great piece! Tears of a clown...when there's no one around!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Canerdy Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 9:36 AM
A HUGE congrats on your win, Kim! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day.......................
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Thanks, Paula!
George Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 4:01 AM
This is a lovely depiction of the clown in tatters. I love the romantic flavor you have added to his otherwise sad and miserable existence, A lovely poem and a well deserved high placement. Congratulations dear Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Parker Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Fantastic No.2!! Congratz. ;o]
Rodrigues Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Thank you, Arlo!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Loved your description of a clown in tatters. Hope all is well at home. My New Year began with a terrible toothache. And more will come. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Hope you’re doing better <3
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