Tatters

no more smiles for me you ~ life broke this loving heart A frown I must wear Date Written: 1/5/2023

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/5/2023 9:09:00 PM

I hope this is fiction my friend Happy New Year!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2023 9:25:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Yes, a sad write but just a write/fiction. Happy New to you~2023. Where did the year go??? Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/5/2023 8:35:00 PM

Sad... As the contest demands:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2023 9:23:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Yes, sad. Some writes need to be sad from time to time. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/5/2023 6:50:00 PM

Paula that’s an excellent Haiku for Tatters… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2023 9:21:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my Haiku Tatters write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/5/2023 2:33:00 PM

Tatters described well Paula ! Well done :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2023 9:18:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/5/2023 12:04:00 PM

Paula, I don't know if it's for the tatters contest, but you conveyed perfectly the spirit of the picture and the sadness of the tatter. Well Done

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/6/2023 9:17:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and kind words. That made my day. Glad you like this tatter write. Yes, it is for the contest. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................