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Eyes, silent and soft, a whisper Falling across so many hearts, Breathing in affections, singing Caresses, messages… Yet filled with melancholy Doubt and despair, darkness In clouds of regret, without the Sparkle of life they had once, Long ago… When he was young, filled with Wonder and inspired… By the brilliance of the sunrise, The intimacy of a starry sky, The music pulsing through the Rainfall, and the delicate brush of kisses Easy against a secret, liquid Like laughter and flowing into The seas, in colors bold and vibrant Hues so alive they tremble, Echoing wonder in hopeful sighs Eyes, mournful and dejected, Pain cutting through the heavens, Abiding within the soul who knows Even in the painted smile, The brushed on eyes, the splattered Dyes faded and worn, in tatters… A coat that is never warm, but colder Than the winter storm, like bitterness Painful and burning through the Heart who knows that it is the loss Thrashing inside him, dimming the light That once kindled his joy, his happiness It is this cloud that hangs Across his heart, obscuring hope With a desperation… That quiets the glimmers of a Reflection, both graceful and accepting The thought of yesterday’s gifts The love that he lost, the truth he Never seemed to grasp, the death of his Bliss, pouring out into seas, oceans Deep and dark – filled with fear Dread that seems to settle Inside his spirit, blending with his Feelings, becoming a part of him, So he can surf through the night, Suffering and enduring the agonizing Rags of his memories, fleeting Through a mind tortured with angst In tatters, Tatters can’t find his way out From amid the punishment, the past With its endless doubt, its persecution And the labored tears that never Do release him from the grief, the ache Tatters, the clown, with his painted On smile and funny garb, Is just as dead inside as the child He buried back before he became… Tatters, the clown! TATTERS Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose January 3, 2023

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Date: 1/9/2023 10:29:00 PM
Once he was so ebullient, greeting everyday with fresh hopes. But time wiped away the cheer from his heart ! Now under the facade of his painted face and smiling countenance, he hides the sighs and tears. You have drawn a moving portrait. Best of luck, Gina!
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Date: 1/5/2023 4:42:00 PM
“Rags of his memories.” Gina, for me this reads like a brilliant character description in a poetic-prose genre novella. This feels quite different from your themes i am more familiar with, an here you SHINE! The description is multi-dimensional, complete, involving, a complete contour! Bravo!! New Year hugs, sally
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Date: 1/4/2023 6:40:00 AM
Excellent poem, Gina, should place high:)
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Date: 1/4/2023 1:02:00 AM
every single line is exquiste-ly penned my friend.
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Date: 1/3/2023 3:34:00 PM
This is so sad Regina. Honestly, there was a time when clowns brought so much joy, were so much fun, and now all my children and many of their friends are actually afraid of them. That was never what their hearts had tried to give to others through their art of performance and laughter. I think many of the clowns of yesterday are left in tatters, like Tatters the clown in your sweet poem. Heartfelt, and so very sad.
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Date: 1/3/2023 11:43:00 AM
Suffering and enduring the agonizing Rags of his memories…and the last verse!
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