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Tattered Pages

the tattered pages flutter with glimpses of places- in one vision the wind has tangled my hair and I have walked a long, long path where a thousand birds sing oh, why am I holding a red rose ? the weeping is so loud that it is like thunder and my heart is breaking _________________________ July 26, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Tattered Pages Copyright Protected, ID 20-1271-761-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, STRAND completely new (14) sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 8/1/2020 3:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win!:)
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Constance La France
Date: 8/10/2020 9:26:00 PM
Brenda, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 7/30/2020 5:18:00 AM
That is so heartfelt and emotional. Great. Kind wishes, Kai
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:00:00 PM
Kai, thanks for the comment and visit _Constance
Date: 7/29/2020 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Constance:-) Congrats on your fine win!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:00:00 PM
Edward, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 7/29/2020 12:38:00 AM
The image of a red rose with the prevailing sadness gets to the heart Constance. Congratulations on your win :)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:01:00 PM
Aditi, thanks for the comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 7/28/2020 11:07:00 PM
A clever piece, Constance, well-worded in its willful way and my compliments on your deserving 1st Place win, my friend -- Aloha~@William
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Constance La France
Date: 7/30/2020 2:01:00 PM
William, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance