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Do not stare at my receding back with eyes full of tears. I am not gone. I am never away from you. I am the reflection in your eyes. I am the diamonds at the end of your lashes. I am the lotus that stays inside the water. Do not stare at my receding back with eyes full of tears. I am not gone. I am never far away from you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/17/2010 4:00:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL INDEED... THE LINE THAT QUOTES "I AM NEVER FAR AWAY FROM YOU" IS VERY SOOTHING... ENJOYED THIS READ... I.T.
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Date: 10/12/2009 9:05:00 PM
Beautiful lines K.K,the middle lines are very lovely comforting and reassuring,great poetry. Best wishes Chacko
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Date: 9/13/2009 7:21:00 PM
"I am the diamonds at the end of your lashes." this is my favorite line...Love, Iolanda
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:11:00 AM
i am never far away from you.beautiful verse.so beautiful--Charma
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Date: 9/11/2009 8:55:00 AM
not what I was expecting, but I am so not disappointed! I love your form and the word choices. You have a true poetic voice. Thanks!
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Date: 9/10/2009 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful poetry penned here. Keep writing my friend, you should share your gift. ~Jen~
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Date: 9/9/2009 2:55:00 PM
Nicely written. Draws one into the poem to think. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:04:00 PM
a better haikuist than my verse Hidden reaches??? well,...goodness me?? Does that mean you thought it wasn't up to my usual haiku? was better than it??...Loved the above verse was there tonight..ok now. soup mail Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:00:00 PM
This is a very beautiful love poem. thank you for sharing it with us.
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