Tasty Trouble

I munched on some brownies with cheer

But soon things became unclear

The world spun around

I fell to the ground

And laughter reduced me to tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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April 9, 2025 at 3:13 AM
They must have been happy brownies - For you to have become grounded - Laughing till you cried - And aching inside - It sure was fun, so it sounded…… Beryl
Delegans Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 9:51 PM
haha,,,all brownies are happy! Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, Beryl.
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