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Tasting the Defeat

*****Tasting the defeat****

Here he is, O'lord;
Lying in an old, sullen and reeking room,
twisted within chains of anger and hatred;
Glowing with the reminiscence of past,
waiting for the death, once he is defeated;
A cacophony is being echoed,
and his gaze is loosing fight with the haze,
heaved with burdens of expectations, once he used to lift;
he is nothing now but a smoke of his own,
withering away as the currents of air shift;
Between the soul and the sane, he tries to suppress the rift;
Devoid of a decent, genuine motive,
he fails to wear his old persona,
and it doesn't matter how hard he tries;
He speaks, shouts, cries, murmurs and sobs,
holds himself with crossed arm and swollen eyes;
burning in his pain and agony,
he, slowly, exhales the mist in his mind,
Tired with the deafening shouts,
He gets terrified with the mere whisper of wind;
he lifts up his eyes and turns,
to look at me in the mirror,
into a painful smile, his lips are twisted;
he pleads before me to save myself,
before he turns into a corpse and I get defeated.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 22, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Nishant, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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April 21, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Hi, Nishant, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following and reading your poems. ~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend ~ LINDA ~
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April 22, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Thank you, Linda, for your generous invitation. I hope you liked my poem. I am looking forward to contact more often. Thanks, again.
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April 20, 2014 at 8:22 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Nishant :) - I choose your first great and very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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April 22, 2014 at 5:40 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise :) I, certainly, willkeep our poetrysoup a haven. I have joined it to grow as a poet. I hope you all will help me. Looking to hear from you. xoxo take care. :)
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April 19, 2014 at 3:03 PM
Dear Sir, So nice a poem you have given. Thanks for your lovingcomments.
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April 22, 2014 at 5:38 AM
Thanks, Sir. But may I, please, make a request to you. Please, don't address me with 'Sir'. I am very very junior to you, Sir. I am just eighteen. I hope, you understand my point. :)
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