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Tasting Bliss For Contest

Tenderly held close
Secrets floating past my ear
Lips gently nibbling
at my mouth sending shock waves
down my spine tongue tasting bliss

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2012

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Heather Ober Date: 1/9/2013 9:09:00 AM Seren, this is gorgeous! I love the second line especially. Congrats on an awesome win! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/9/2013 2:07:00 AM Belated congratulations on your winning spot Seren love xx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/9/2013 7:34:00 AM thanks Mandy ....Seren

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/8/2013 7:11:00 PM congrats for your win. and I disagree with what you told Debs down below here. You fit in with EVERYbody here perfectly!! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 7:15:00 PM Thank you Andrea, I do have a go lol......Seren

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/8/2013 6:31:00 PM Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/8/2013 6:45:00 PM wow thats strong words Debbie, nooo I am jut a jobbing poet, not like the ones on here that can write fantastic things..... Seren

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/7/2013 6:11:00 PM seren, I know this one placed in my contest, I just can't remember which placement. Anyway, I am seeing it by finding winners under titles of the poems here at Soup. Congratulations. This one was especially sensual! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/7/2013 7:03:00 PM Youngave it 7th place Andrea according to my list in members area. Thank you very much....Seren

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/25/2012 5:30:00 PM Very passionate entry into contest..Winner for sure in my opinion..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/24/2012 9:26:00 PM Seren, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 12/24/2012 9:54:00 AM Could feel it too! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2012 5:23:00 PM Lol. ....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/24/2012 7:42:00 AM naughty but I think very nice, watch out Santa ............ Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2012 7:49:00 AM Me write something naughty, no way....lol ...Seren

Rollo West Date: 12/23/2012 8:19:00 PM Hi Seren, this is a really great write, lots of amour. Rollo Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 12/24/2012 7:20:00 AM Thanks Rollo. Have a great holiday....Seren