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Tasting Bliss For Contest

Tenderly held close
Secrets floating past my ear
Lips gently nibbling
at my mouth sending shock waves
down my spine tongue tasting bliss

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Heather Ober

January 9, 2013 at 9:09 AM

Seren, this is gorgeous! I love the second line especially. Congrats on an awesome win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 9, 2013 at 2:07 AM

Belated congratulations on your winning spot Seren love xx

Seren Roberts

January 9, 2013 at 7:34 AM

thanks Mandy ....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

January 8, 2013 at 7:11 PM

congrats for your win. and I disagree with what you told Debs down below here. You fit in with EVERYbody here perfectly!!

Seren Roberts

January 8, 2013 at 7:15 PM

Thank you Andrea, I do have a go lol......Seren

Debbie Guzzi

January 8, 2013 at 6:31 PM

Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love

Seren Roberts

January 8, 2013 at 6:45 PM

wow thats strong words Debbie, nooo I am jut a jobbing poet, not like the ones on here that can write fantastic things..... Seren

Andrea Dietrich

January 7, 2013 at 6:11 PM

seren, I know this one placed in my contest, I just can't remember which placement. Anyway, I am seeing it by finding winners under titles of the poems here at Soup. Congratulations. This one was especially sensual!

Seren Roberts

January 7, 2013 at 7:03 PM

Youngave it 7th place Andrea according to my list in members area. Thank you very much....Seren

Sara Kendrick

December 25, 2012 at 5:30 PM

Very passionate entry into contest..Winner for sure in my opinion..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2012 at 9:26 PM

Seren, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD