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Taste My Love

You have wandered for long Seeking a place to be strong. Falling from the mountain into the valley. You vowed not to visit the pit again. No matter the precious treasures hidden there Though you have been to the lion’s den, Remember that there was honey in the carcass of the lion. Let me help you build the new world. It possesses a golden path and a honey river. Taste my love, taste my love I have the sweetest honey hidden in my heart. My love will bring the sunshine to your life. Allow me to resurrect your dead love. I shall spice it with Solomon’s song . The fragrance of my love will be with you forever.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/12/2017 9:35:00 AM

This makes me think of Samson's riddle. A tremendous first piece for the soup. A belated welcome.

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 10/12/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thank you for your comment.

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 8/9/2017 7:54:00 PM

Well Fresh, clear, aromatic just a grand read. I'm a believer and new follower; Poem sweet, short and very sweet thanks for sharing write ON --James

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 10/16/2017 5:59:00 AM

I appreciate your time. Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2017 5:34:00 PM

wow, it kind of reminds me actually of a psalm, so deep and poetic!! It was a pleasure to read your first post, Derek.

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 10/16/2017 5:59:00 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your comment.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/28/2014 6:35:00 AM

Interesting and creative. Congrats on your poem being featured this week,

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 6/3/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thanks for your comment

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 7:52:00 AM

Great write - congrats on being featured this week!!

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 6/3/2014 11:12:00 AM

thanks for your comment

Diane Christian

Date: 5/27/2014 7:29:00 AM

congratualtions on your featured poem wonderful

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 2/26/2015 11:16:00 AM

I appreciate .

Skat A

Date: 5/15/2014 9:02:00 AM

Hi DEREK, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2014 3:38:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Derek :) - I choose your first sweet written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Derek Noble Ayi
Date: 6/3/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thanks for reading my poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2014 1:00:00 PM

Derek, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/13/2014 12:28:00 PM

Sound delicious. A golden path and a honey river, well said.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/13/2014 10:15:00 AM

Beautiful poem dripping with sweet honey! Great write. Thank you for sharing!