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laziness syndrome laziness symptom symptom of stress stress that enervates enervates at work work in an office office everyday everyday is loaded loaded with subject subject to penalty penalty for a day day one absent absent minding minding the penalty penalty for late late consecutively consecutively for 1-2 minutes minutes in singing singing an anthem anthem of country country citizens citizens work hard hard work inside inside work place place to be patient patient all the time time for cogitating cogitating hard hard life life is a challenge challenge to continue continue to acknowledge acknowledge more duties duties for all all must enjoy enjoy and smile smile always always be happy happy despite hurt happy despite violation violation hurts ©2016Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved Feb. 19, 2016 10.14pm poem based from an experience at work:) 5x late even 1,2 or 3 min=a day absent -just a try of blitz poem

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/26/2016 1:15:00 PM

A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share

Len Gasun
Date: 5/29/2016 8:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for the very encouraging feedback my dear friend Funom. I'm so sorry for coming only now because I was super duper busy but I need to drop by now for a while to say thank you so much. I will come back soon to read from you and others here, i promise. Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2016 9:45:00 AM

- Love this one, dear friend Leonora :) - Always great work from you - I wish you a lovely Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 5/29/2016 8:29:00 AM

oh, sorry I've missed to read this comment from you my dearest friend, Anne lise! TYTYSSSM belatedly. I'll visit you soon i promise! Just dropping by here for a while to say thanks before proceeding to my assignments for this coming week. A blessed weekend and God bless! Hugs!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/12/2016 11:31:00 AM

No way! If you're 3 mins late it's taken as a day absent??? I'd never be at work if that was the rule here, as I'm always 5-10 mins late. Besides great Blitz, you make me want to try one too.

Len Gasun
Date: 3/12/2016 6:15:00 PM

:)))Thank you my dear friend, scott. I guess, it's nice to try this form sometimes. Thanks a lot for stopping by. I'll come back and visit you by next wk perhaps coz I've to prepare many things for Eng. Camps tomorrow. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2016 7:22:00 PM

This form suits you, Galeo. And about that note at the bottom. I almost thought you were a student at our school. They also are absent but after only three times tardy!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/29/2016 8:19:00 AM

:))Do you mean my first try of blitz was good my dear friend, Andrea? Thank you so much! "Bout your next comments, I was really late coz of continuous feeling of lethargy, perhaps of too much workload these sems. :)) But, it's fine with me now, as long as i can rest and prioritize my health:)). Thanks a lot for stopping by. Hugs!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/21/2016 12:22:00 AM

Excellent pen Leonora! Beautifully painted picture here in this Blitz.Well done!A 7! And thank you so much for visiting my page, and very kind comments and all.Very deeply appreciated always dear friend, you're very sweet.Sending lots of love n' hugs to you too:))Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you always!:) D

Len Gasun
Date: 2/21/2016 7:22:00 AM

You're welcome my dear friend. It was my pleasure. Thank you so much as well for stopping by. Just came back home from my dentist. I'll visit you again soon.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 2:56:00 AM

Hello, My lovely SIS, I am pleased to read your poem. For a second there I thought you were talking about me. LOL, I'm so lazy and everything like stress is causing it. Anyways, I hope you are okay. You've brought this one out well, with the attached message of life being a challenge. I love your words. Moreover, I love the new style of your poem. This is a great and awesome free verse SIS... Have a great day today, always Your BFF and sis... Love LINDA

Len Gasun
Date: 2/21/2016 8:15:00 AM

Ops, coming back to thank you so much my dearest sis for reading my poem of sentiments:)) and your encouraging comments. So, this is also a free verse. Thank you, thank you so much! Hugs! Pls. say Hi to Nathan for me pls. Thanks!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/21/2016 7:36:00 AM

Hello my dearest sis! I just came back home. I've been suffering from toothache since yesterday, so after lunch I decided to visit my dentist and had my molar removed. So painful.. I was sooo scared but the dentist told me to relax. I'll go back again tom. for fill-in etc. How are you? The poem was about my experience, I've accumulated so many days in 1-2 min.late and was absent for 4 days because of the big penalty/deduction. I felt sad but I'd to admit, I got lazy and almost dragging myself to go to school every morning fr. Mon-Sat :)))

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/20/2016 2:58:00 AM

Nathan, Likes this blitz form a lot. :) Hope to see him stop by. I heard he's been active. Hugs... Forever BFF's LINDA