Len Gasun Poet Blitz

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Tardiness

laziness syndrome
laziness symptom
symptom of stress
stress that enervates
enervates at work
work in an office
office everyday
everyday is loaded
loaded with subject
subject to penalty
penalty for a day 
day one absent
absent minding
minding the penalty
penalty for  late
late consecutively
consecutively for 1-2 minutes
minutes in singing
singing an anthem
anthem of country
country citizens
citizens work hard
hard work inside
inside work place
place to be patient
patient all the time
time for cogitating
cogitating hard 
hard life
life is a challenge
challenge to continue
continue to acknowledge
acknowledge  more duties
duties for all
all must enjoy
enjoy and smile
smile always
always be happy
happy despite hurt
happy despite violation
violation
hurts
 


©2016Leonora Galinta
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Feb. 19, 2016  10.14pm

poem based from an experience at work:) 5x late even 1,2  or 3 min=a day absent

-just a try of blitz poem

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Funom Makama May 26, 2016 at 1:15 PM A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share Len Gasun May 29, 2016 at 8:32 AM Thank you so much for the very encouraging feedback my dear friend Funom. I'm so sorry for coming only now because I was super duper busy but I need to drop by now for a while to say thank you so much. I will come back soon to read from you and others here, i promise. Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2016 at 9:45 AM - Love this one, dear friend Leonora :) - Always great work from you - I wish you a lovely Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun May 29, 2016 at 8:29 AM oh, sorry I've missed to read this comment from you my dearest friend, Anne lise! TYTYSSSM belatedly. I'll visit you soon i promise! Just dropping by here for a while to say thanks before proceeding to my assignments for this coming week. A blessed weekend and God bless! Hugs!

Scott Thirtyseven March 12, 2016 at 11:31 AM No way! If you're 3 mins late it's taken as a day absent??? I'd never be at work if that was the rule here, as I'm always 5-10 mins late. Besides great Blitz, you make me want to try one too. Len Gasun March 12, 2016 at 6:15 PM :)))Thank you my dear friend, scott. I guess, it's nice to try this form sometimes. Thanks a lot for stopping by. I'll come back and visit you by next wk perhaps coz I've to prepare many things for Eng. Camps tomorrow. Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2016 at 7:22 PM This form suits you, Galeo. And about that note at the bottom. I almost thought you were a student at our school. They also are absent but after only three times tardy! Len Gasun February 29, 2016 at 8:19 AM :))Do you mean my first try of blitz was good my dear friend, Andrea? Thank you so much! "Bout your next comments, I was really late coz of continuous feeling of lethargy, perhaps of too much workload these sems. :)) But, it's fine with me now, as long as i can rest and prioritize my health:)). Thanks a lot for stopping by. Hugs!

Dorian Petersen Potter February 21, 2016 at 12:22 AM Excellent pen Leonora! Beautifully painted picture here in this Blitz.Well done!A 7! And thank you so much for visiting my page, and very kind comments and all.Very deeply appreciated always dear friend, you're very sweet.Sending lots of love n' hugs to you too:))Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you always!:) D Len Gasun February 21, 2016 at 7:22 AM You're welcome my dear friend. It was my pleasure. Thank you so much as well for stopping by. Just came back home from my dentist. I'll visit you again soon.

Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 2:56 AM Hello, My lovely SIS, I am pleased to read your poem. For a second there I thought you were talking about me. LOL, I'm so lazy and everything like stress is causing it. Anyways, I hope you are okay. You've brought this one out well, with the attached message of life being a challenge. I love your words. Moreover, I love the new style of your poem. This is a great and awesome free verse SIS... Have a great day today, always Your BFF and sis... Love LINDA Len Gasun February 21, 2016 at 8:15 AM Ops, coming back to thank you so much my dearest sis for reading my poem of sentiments:)) and your encouraging comments. So, this is also a free verse. Thank you, thank you so much! Hugs! Pls. say Hi to Nathan for me pls. Thanks! Len Gasun February 21, 2016 at 7:36 AM Hello my dearest sis! I just came back home. I've been suffering from toothache since yesterday, so after lunch I decided to visit my dentist and had my molar removed. So painful.. I was sooo scared but the dentist told me to relax. I'll go back again tom. for fill-in etc. How are you? The poem was about my experience, I've accumulated so many days in 1-2 min.late and was absent for 4 days because of the big penalty/deduction. I felt sad but I'd to admit, I got lazy and almost dragging myself to go to school every morning fr. Mon-Sat :))) Poet Destroyer A February 20, 2016 at 2:58 AM Nathan, Likes this blitz form a lot. :) Hope to see him stop by. I heard he's been active. Hugs... Forever BFF's LINDA