Taps

The old man stood silently, head bowed
Fighting back tears that needed to flow freely
A young Marine was playing Taps on the hill above
He and his wife shattered by the recent events
Holding on to his sanity with the loss of his son
War? What is it good for, what purpose does it serve
In defense of our nation, yes
For the protection of our freedom, yes
To fill a hunger for power, no; a thirst for greed, never
Oh God, to lose your child, the war never ends
As the last note is played, his knees buckle in grief
My son, Oh God, my son, Taps echoing in the distance
If his death served a purpose there could be a closing
If for one moment he could believe but it wasn’t there
Looking at his wife and the despair in her eyes he remembers
The words to an old folk song play over and over in his mind
When will they ever learn? When will they ever learn?
In the days to come, he’ll sit by his son’s grave and talk
One sided conversations but he knows he hears him
So much to say, family, politics, war, questions unanswered
Why did you have to die son, Why? Dear God, tell me why
War, What is it good for?  What purpose under heaven
A grieving father, an inconsolable mother, the answer burns
Absolutely nothing!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/27/2010 3:12:00 PM
Vince, you are absolutely right and have stated quite eloquently, the insanity of war. There is no answer, and never will be, as long as greed and desire for power exist. Since there is no way they will ever be extinguished, there will always be a grieving father and an unconsolable mother. Your writing does much to express that it is not the soldier, sailor, or marine that is at fault--they accept the blame for those who are. Mac
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Date: 9/2/2009 1:59:00 AM
Captivating and poignant, Nice work...Raul
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Date: 8/14/2009 10:20:00 PM
Vince this poem is excellent - congrats on placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:26:00 PM
Great writing and congratulations on your well deserved recognition. Its a question we try to answer but never will. Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2009 2:31:00 PM
Amen. Great write here, Vince ... congratulations on your win in Debra's contest!
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Date: 8/14/2009 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Deborahs contest. All the Best, Will
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Vince. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2009 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations for your winning poem. TL
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:42:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Vince.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/13/2009 5:55:00 PM
So well deserving a winning place in Deborah's contest! What a powerful poem....Congratulations! ~ love,Carrie
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Date: 8/13/2009 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations, Vince, on your well deserved placement in Deborah Guzzi's "War...what is it good for?" contest. Taps are so touching and such an honorable tribute to such a dreadful even- death. Exdellent writing. Sincerely, DAS-J
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Date: 8/13/2009 2:48:00 PM
Congrats brother.
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Date: 8/4/2009 10:54:00 AM
Thanks for the perspective on my blog. Woderful, powerful verse above. Light & Love
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Date: 7/28/2009 10:00:00 AM
Agree-Agree-Agree...narrative is a style I've never tried, but you make it worth looking into..great write...Lary
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Date: 7/27/2009 4:33:00 PM
Heartfelt poem Vince, so so many families have lived your words>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 12:11:00 PM
Should have figured it was you ;). You brought a lump to my throat and a tear to my eye.....best so far..BIG HUGS...Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2009 10:42:00 AM
First thing, you really made me feel the dads anguish, the hurt, and the loss. Secondly I personally don't think there was ever a good war nor will there ever be. But ever since Cain slew Abel we haven't been abel to stop killing each other. Vince you are one of the best writers on the Soup. God Bless my friend. Ron
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