William Kelii Kekaula Poet Light Verse

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Taps 10pm Lights Out

*Image of Tap Water Drops by Pixabay.

Taps 10PM Lights Out

Drip, drip, drip goes my faucet
a wrench is all that I need
no tools to stop that racket
earphones are more like my speed.

RhymeScheme: abab

2021 August 16

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Michelle Faulkner August 19, 2021 at 8:12 AM That's exactly how I feel - put on earphones and drown it out! William Kelii Kekaula August 19, 2021 at 9:54 AM Dealing with sounds, irritable with pleasant, thanks Michelle, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich August 18, 2021 at 12:01 PM Good one, William. I know exactly the feeling!! William Kelii Kekaula August 18, 2021 at 12:09 PM Ugh! Ah! Zzz ... onomatopoeia felt, thanks, Andrea, Aloha!

Sotto Poet August 17, 2021 at 5:42 PM Very well writing and great imagery, William:) God bless William Kelii Kekaula August 17, 2021 at 5:57 PM Lasaad, after reading Milt's blog, I'm unsure if my entry is what he meant and that THIS and my 'Grandpa' Light Verse, are more of what he's looking for, anyway, I'm grateful for your sharing my friend, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2021 at 5:36 AM I hear the drip drip in your words. Well written, William. William Kelii Kekaula August 17, 2021 at 11:46 AM I gave it a shot after I read Milt's blog, thanks Vijay, Aloha!