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*Image of Tap Water Drops by Pixabay. Taps 10PM Lights Out Drip, drip, drip goes my faucet a wrench is all that I need no tools to stop that racket earphones are more like my speed. RhymeScheme: abab 2021 August 16

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/19/2021 8:12:00 AM

That's exactly how I feel - put on earphones and drown it out!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/19/2021 9:54:00 AM

Dealing with sounds, irritable with pleasant, thanks Michelle, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2021 12:01:00 PM

Good one, William. I know exactly the feeling!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/18/2021 12:09:00 PM

Ugh! Ah! Zzz ... onomatopoeia felt, thanks, Andrea, Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/17/2021 5:42:00 PM

Very well writing and great imagery, William:) God bless

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2021 5:57:00 PM

Lasaad, after reading Milt's blog, I'm unsure if my entry is what he meant and that THIS and my 'Grandpa' Light Verse, are more of what he's looking for, anyway, I'm grateful for your sharing my friend, Aloha!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/17/2021 5:36:00 AM

I hear the drip drip in your words. Well written, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2021 11:46:00 AM

I gave it a shot after I read Milt's blog, thanks Vijay, Aloha!