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Tapping Thoughts

The rain taps on the metal like reminders, not to forget Those sunny days that seem so rare always return to dry the wet Puddles of mirrors on the ground Quiet reflections, left to see I find the peace just by looking at these pictures in front of me The weather changes, liife changes, in a minute, hour or day I remember when the sky is bright, there's time to celebrate and play Maybe, I'll tap dance like the rain The mirrors will return a smile As the warm sun beams shine again I'll celebrate another mile Heidi Sands 4/11/24 8 Syllables (C)opyright

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Date: 4/16/2024 7:45:00 PM
'Tap dance' -- What a creative response to a gray, rainy day, Heidi. You are the irrepressible 'sunshine bunny!' Huzzah, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/17/2024 5:29:00 AM
LoL Thank you Gershon. Have a great day :)
Date: 4/13/2024 11:23:00 PM
Your poem gave me an uplifting, joyous spirit. I like the sound of tapping it brought.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2024 5:32:00 AM
That is nice to hear. Thank you Hilda :)
Date: 4/12/2024 5:36:00 AM
Beautifully rhythmic, in sync with nature, my friend. A delightful read waltzing with joy, amid rain and shine.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2024 5:37:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your positive feedback. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/11/2024 9:02:00 PM
Very nice poem! A favorite. Have a nice day lovely Heidi ~ AA
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/12/2024 5:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Abdullah. I appreciate the Fave! I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 4/11/2024 3:16:00 PM
Hello Heidi, I enjoyed this poem. I like the title. I love the sound of the rain. it is a peaceful sound. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2024 11:25:00 AM
Hello Heidi, Your welcome. Heidi. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2024 3:42:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this Darlene. Thank you for the kind comment. Hugs :)

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