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Entry for the Still Holding My Own Poetry Contest: Sponsored by:  Margarita Lillico 

 

The tap and the sink had a brawl (the pair being stuck to the wall) the cold tap smashed the sink with a crash and a plink; serenely watched by the pee stall. Interposed did tap’s buddy, drain, (who held up the sink with a strain.) Dear sink is in pieces; her value decreases; she once was so smart and urbane!

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Date: 12/2/2024 2:32:00 PM
very cute. Congrats on your win, Terry
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Date: 11/28/2024 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Terry! Your fifth line in the first one is one syllable short. Make sure you count:)
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/29/2024 3:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, should have counted, could not get onto How Many Syllables so used another checker, thank you for including me anyway, will amend.

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