Tao Te Ski

The state of flow, eternal Tao Dance in the ephemeral now A Bound mind will not allow A Joyous downward plow Soft snow, honored thou Its own meaning endow Feet atop sacred bough Snow cut by skis’ prow Let me show you how 4/5/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Very COOL monorhyme poem, Tom!!
Quigley Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 8:45 PM
Ideally, otherwise it gets slushy! ;-) Thanks!
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 11:00 AM
i like the meditative feel of this one, tom... well done!..huggs
Quigley Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Oops! Comment jumped--Thanks! Moving meditation is my favorite kind. :-)
Quigley Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 8:43 PM
Thanks! So many ways one can approach the subject of water...under, over, frozen, snow, running...
Turner Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Never learned to snow ski. Too old now!. Nice poem. Peace my friend:)
Quigley Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 9:26 AM
Thanks! Have a good one. :-)
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