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Tantalizing

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The tastes of spring jostle my taste buds to awaken. To stand up, Get poked out on tongue. Then to flick and lick, from the very tip of my tongue. Savoring the tantalizing, titillating, tit-bit tastes, that spring in season, rendered in bounteous bounty harvests, from berries, fruits, peas, herbs, beans and juices. Premeditated, contemplated and jazz-jammed to razzmatazz improvisations and mantras by scents wafting up the nose. The five senses, five essences, five heavenly scents, dance and jive rejoicing in the tantalizing quintuplet of quintessential tastes, that emerge in spring: sweet, sour, salty, bitter, umami.

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Date: 8/10/2023 9:03:00 AM
"The five senses, five essences, five heavenly scents, dance and jive rejoicing in the tantalizing quintuplet of quintessential tastes" - Great work. Congratulations!
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John Anderson
Date: 8/10/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes
Date: 8/8/2023 1:41:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive lines you have penned in this one. I am glad that you posted this one today. Sara
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John Anderson
Date: 8/8/2023 2:11:00 PM
thanks very much and cheers!
Date: 8/7/2023 11:14:00 AM
what a tasty treat you served up to us John, love the layout of the poem its super cool , hugs jan xx
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John Anderson
Date: 8/7/2023 1:04:00 PM
thanks very much, Cheers imbibing!
Date: 8/7/2023 10:23:00 AM
I'll skip the peas and take the poem. Nice john
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John Anderson
Date: 8/7/2023 10:26:00 AM
Thanks and Cheers, 'Peas' sorta worked (climbed) their way into the flow!

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