Tanka T1

Nature’s works enwombed

gravities' umbilical;

Hold me mother earth

universe sings cradle song,

solar winds whisper… hurry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mister Roboto Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 7:16 PM
woah bro. Gravities' umbilical....man! this joint would have Carl Sagan stretchin' out his turtle neck in great celebration! NICE!
Perritano Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 6:02 AM
carl sagan rocks!
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March 27, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Michael, love it...wow.. what a tanka, thank you for the lovely poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV~PD
Perritano Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 6:39 AM
thank you so much, glad you enjoyed this
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