Tanka Poetic

The tree Limb snapped off
it fell on the Lumberjack
it hurt him very badly
He kept working, tho.


Copyright McCuen 2008
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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November 2, 2008 at 10:47 AM
I grew up in lumber towns..Ill tell you unless there was loss of blood or breathing..they kept working. Love this little piece. BG
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