Tanka Love Actually

Tanka 
Milk maids and romance 
In the hay of romp and love 
Mules ate the fodder 
Bare floorboards on the hayloft 
But fragrance of love remains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 29, 2013 at 8:57 AM
you always throw a zinger in to get me right in the whatever -- This time it's "Bare floorboards on the hayloft." Here's to love.
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