Tanka Ii

amber river
smoke signals new birth
coming forth
the midwife is unseen
in the vast nursery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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September 9, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment on my poem. It led me here and I love this Tanka, especially the way the third line works!
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