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TANKA II

wet earth smells of mud small frog swings on garden gate creaking in the breeze cool rain drops tap his eyelids he sees what he wants to see

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Date: 1/2/2025 7:11:00 PM
I think you have a gift for the tanka format. Brilliantly penned. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 1/2/2025 6:13:00 AM
The froggy went for a ride. love your theme in this one MH...
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Date: 1/2/2025 7:29:00 AM
This one was fun to write. Thanks for commenting, Michael.
Date: 12/28/2024 4:46:00 PM
Nice perspective. :)
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