Tanka

Tanka Philosopher general The pride of the armed forces Left starched underpants In a woman´s hot bedroom And lost yet another combat

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Date: 11/16/2012 7:54:00 AM

They're often with their pants down, but not often (enough) caught... Terry (funny and biting)

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:02:00 PM

thank you Terry

Date: 11/16/2012 7:00:00 AM

Ooowww.

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:02:00 PM

thank you kathy

Date: 11/15/2012 8:20:00 PM

haha, this is funny!

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM

thank you andrea

Date: 11/15/2012 4:59:00 PM

Love this write! So witty and I like to see arrogant blighters lose a battle....HA

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM

thank you Victoria

Date: 11/15/2012 4:59:00 PM

Love this write! So witty and I like to see arrogant blighters lose a battle....HA

Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM

thank you victoria