Tanka 3-Top Ten Contest

Sailed away on a ship called hope,
then life was full of fun.
Hurricane Regret capsized us,
clouds covered the sun.  
I clung to hope.                 


Penned. March 23 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Yvonne Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Best of luck in the contest!
Roberts Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 6:17 AM
Thanks Armand, I do a thank a you...Seren
Yvonne Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 2:38 PM
By tha way you donna hav to tanka me. Is justa what a thought a!
Yvonne Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Excellent take on this contest!
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