Tanka 13

Tanka 13
	
	
	anxiety and
	excitement are physio-
	logically i-
	dentical...  so sayeth my
	therapist    I’m not convinced
	
	
	
	
	
	01.14.14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Devonshire Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:18 PM
How witty, Jack! I'll have to favorite this poem. Absolutely love it! Congratulations on your win! Best Wishes, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:18 PM
creative and interesting. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Jordan Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Joyce... Jack
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 6:58 PM
funny how you made your syllables fit her specifications. Congrats for your win, my friend.
Jordan Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Thanks, Andrea.... It sort of reflected my fractured state at the time. Jack
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:27 AM
A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, jack
Jordan Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Thanks you for giving me a place in your contest... Jack
A   Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 1:51 AM
Jack, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
A   Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 4:55 PM
yeah,,,ok
Jordan Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 4:49 PM
Thanks for the support, as always... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2014 at 8:16 PM
we release the same body chemicals when we get excited or feel anxious... of course the emotional reaction between the two may differ... love the puzzling feel of this, jack.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:47 PM
hmmm, no I do not agree with that at ALL!!! Wish I could afford a therapist to tell him that. haha
Jordan Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:55 PM
I trust my therapist, but anxiety and excitement feel very different to me, so I agree with you... Jack
Tacito Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 6:22 PM
HAHA! LOVE IT! I thought this was going to be some deep writing. In a way, it still is...awesome job!
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